The Official Writing Challenge
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Having been in a similar situation to Brianna this story brings memory flooding back - memory and regret even forty years on. God bless you, Writer. Keep it up.
03/13/08
You really NAILED the topic with this one, and I SO felt for your MC. Nice job.
03/13/08
Oh, this is good--have the teens in your church do a discussion on this one! You nailed teenage behavior and feelings.

FYI--"who's" means "who is". You wanted "whose". And your title may have given away a bit too much.

This is absolutely perfect for this week's topic.
Excellent! Although I had a "feeling" about how it would end (perhaps partly because of your title), it was a great example of the subject...and really great in terms of teen thinking / behavior. Thanks.
03/16/08
So sad, so very sad. My tears first started to fall immediately when the teacher said something about "help counselling" for those who were her friends - and she had none. A great example written here of our Topic this week...and the impact that, for some, there is no tomorrow. Well told, well written, and well received! Thank you!