The Official Writing Challenge
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Nice poem, weak on topic but enjoyable sentiment. Keep writing.
I really liked your poem; however, (there seems to always be a "however", right?) the difficult part is to FIND that answer that is supposedly ALWAYS there. For me, it just doesn't happen; but your poetry is extremely well written, and I wish I had the faith that you have. Enjoyed the read and am fascinated by real, true, rhyming-type poetry. Well done! Enjoyed the read and the message.
Very lovely sentiments, with a much to ponder.

I tripped up in the meter a bit, but it could just be me.

Enjoyed this very much.
I don't read a lot of poetry, but I found this one very well done. It seemed on topic to me and I thought it had a great message. Keep up the great work!