The Official Writing Challenge
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03/06/08
Magnificent writing! I'll bet the red-headed boy wins a silver medal!
03/06/08
Very visual piece - I especially loved your "screw top" analogy - very vivid! Good stuff.
03/07/08
Good descriptive writing, only I'm not exactly seeing the topic.
More like 'pride comes before...'
I enjoyed your story.
"The lid wasn't coming off." LOL... Too funny! Great story.
03/12/08
With the focus on the loser at the end, the story seemed to be about pride and fall or silent retribution instead of keeping focus on the MC and the silver lining being a positive for him. Good story and action and repetition in action with a twist.