The Official Writing Challenge
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02/21/08
Beautiful, I felt every ounce of emotion you put into this peice.
02/22/08
This is really good writing. Your title caught my eye, and all the richness of sights, sounds, and feelings kept me captive. Poor woman! What a character! On topic!
I love your descriptions and the thought processes of the MC. Very well done and spot on topic.
02/22/08
A good story with a memorable character. Keep writing.
02/22/08
Beautiful writing...one of my favorites so far.
02/23/08
Just lovely - I could picture it all so well. I love the honesty here.
So good and so sad. I really liked Marti and the voice you gave her in this story.
This is one of my favorites this week. Everything from the title, to the story, to the descriptions, to the main character, all were superb. I think you will be moving up a level pretty soon. Thank you for blessing me with this story! :)
This is one of my favorites this week. I especailly enjoyed her real attitude at the end of the day. Keep up the good words.