The Official Writing Challenge
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Very sad story--brings to mind Harry Chapin's "Cat's in the Cradle."

I didn't get a connection to the proverb, though.

I like the structure of this poem, and the effective use of repetition.
Very unique, and definitely written by a deep thinker. Perhaps too deep for me to give an accurate assessment or to how it pertains to our topic; but you have talent - keep writing.
A fun play on words for the photographer--a Deep play on words for the photographer. I think we can all do the same thing, whatever our 'vice'. I didn't see a connection to the topic, but I think/hope I caught the meaning in the poem. :-)
Much to deep for me. Keep writing.