The Official Writing Challenge
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How very, very clever and so funny. Enjoyable to read and shows great promise as a winner. Keep it up.
Such a clever idea. Great message.
Adam's line is missing a word I think towards the end. I look forward to knowing what he was supposed to say.
Very good writing.
How creative! I love it! I love it! I love it!
Very creative! I love the sssserpent's sssspeech ssssoo funny.
What a great entry. I hope you can find some actors daring enough to wear A&E's costume.

I would drop the commercials unless an important message is inserted there because I would not want to interrupt the flow if this is performed. Allow the audience to experience the benefits of Public Sector broadcasting. The sketch will only run for a few minutes.
A very inventive take for the topic. Needs a lot of tweaking if it was written to be performed (like stage cues, for the commercials,) or like a previous commenter said, that could be left out.