The Official Writing Challenge
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Yes, we get disappointed with so many things in life that offered us so much more than it or they eventually give us. You almost tresspassed into using the proverb but just about evaded it. Thanks for writing your piece for us to read.
Fool's gold is certainly a good title for this week! This short piece was great, it didn't drag on too long and was alright with everything else. Nice job, the lesson in there is good. ^_^
You have some excellent points and a great message.

I think that the "without a literal illustration" part of the topic may be questioned by the judges.

Great reminder of where our focus needs to be and how we were created. Good job.
A very well written devotional. Not only true to the topic this week - but an enlightening and enjoyable read. Kudos!