The Official Writing Challenge
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01/25/08
Very good illustration.
Good use of the prompt. I'm a little confused about the actual conflict. Was it the boss's interfering wife or the inept accounting manager? Other than that, it's a good story with a lot of potential. I especially liked the potted plant metaphore.
Very good use of the prompt. I'm a little confused by the actual conflict. Was it the boss's interfering wife or the inept financial manager? Other than that, It's a good story. I especially like the potted plant metaphor.
01/26/08
Like the potted plant metaphor. I got a little confused on the timeline as the story kept backing up. Realistic scenario that kept me reading to the end.