The Official Writing Challenge
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Yes, HE will do to trust. I like it that you remind us to follow THE leader. With our eyes on him, we are less likely to fall on our faces.
Great analogy!

Except for the sayings, you don't need to use so many quotation marks. They usually indicate that you're using a phrase ironically, and they lessen the impact of what you're saying.

Good writing--keep up the good work.