The Official Writing Challenge
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Yikes! Those first several paragraphs were quite gripping! I wasn't clear, though, on who "your friend" was, as no friend was mentioned in the group of people assembled. Was it the policeman?

After that initial confusion, it flowed smoothly and was fascinating reading.
Well done Ken. Those days at Hogsback were quite a learning curve!! Keep writing and entertaining us with your lovely stories. By the way who was the snake???
Anyone I know? Lotsa love to you and Shas. Norms
I too wondered who was the friend, but found it did get less confusing. I like the use of diapers and cotton briefs at the end.
I was fascinated by this, since I'm not at all familiar with demonic manifestations. It must have been a frightening event. I, too, was a little confused about the "friend," but the message came through loud and clear. Well done.
I first thought from the title and the first couple of paragraphs that this was suppose to be a humourous piece. I see it wasn't, although some humour was interjected. Interesting, good writing overall.
Wow! What a fantastic read! Since Non-fiction writing is my cup of tea - It was not only fascinating but enjoyable. Even the title reached out and grabbed my interest...and you're right on subject, topic-wise. Fine job.