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Good character study--I feel as if I know her now.

I'm not clear on how Johnny Carson's monologue led to her spiritual awakening...and I'd suggest that you work on more complex sentence structures. Many of your sentences are quite short, which gives your story a "choppy" feel.

I like your title, and the gracious words of wisdom from the pastor at the end.
I agree. This is very good, but I got confused on how the television brought her to conviction and thought her class struggle happened to fast. This is great though. You should develop it more.
The concept was very good. Needs a lot of work on sentence structure and phrasing. Try letting someone else read it through a couple of times. Keep writing and it will get better.