The Official Writing Challenge
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Very nice original piece!

I pictured the story. I imagined it as a children’s book. Being that the characters were not human the lesson could be tame enough.
Excellent work! Keep shining for our Lord! Your writing is a blessing to me. Well put- we should always be thankful for His blessings and not be greedy for more!
I could picture this as a children's book - complete with adorable illustrations. A great lesson with wonderful rhyme and meter. Fun.
Great poem! Enjoyed it.
This mama read your wonderful rhyme and said it to her children. THEY absolutely loved it, and it spurred a great conversation. Thank you!
Ok, no words! This is just excellent! Good job!
Clever teaching lesson nicely cloaked in verse. Such things can take us by suprise...learning something when we hadn't intended to.
LOVE IT! A message to be taken to heart. Delivered in a masterful way!
This is WAY cute and a good message delivered in a creative poem. Great job.
Perfect! Rhyme, meter, imagery, and a message wonderful illustrated.
Wonderful and fun, I agree with the book comments.
Awwww.... awesome! This one could be an illustrated children's book!