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12/07/07
How touching!

Be careful not to put apostrophes in plural words (as in your first line), and I think you meant "presence" instead of "presents".

This doesn't seem to go along with the topic of "home groups," but it's definitely a sweet poem of tribute to your brother.
12/08/07
A lovely, heartfelt piece. Not sure how it relates to the topic, but I certainly was touched by it. Keep writing!