The Official Writing Challenge
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12/07/07
This was cute--I can just see these little ol' ladies struggling with their tasks and helping each other.

Some of your sentences were awkwardly phrased--I had to re-read several times to understand what you were saying. And although this was a "group", I'm not sure it was on topic.

I appreciated the unique setting--it made for a refreshing read.
12/08/07
Cute ladies and neat setting.
I also struggled a bit with some of your wording, but enjoyed the read nonetheless. Keep writing!