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Wow. I loved the change of heart your MC acquired. Thanks be to God.
Wow, lots of suspense here!

There were some unnecessary commas, and a few other places where commas were needed...sorry about that, I'm a comma fanatic.

I hung on every word here, and loved how it turned out.
This is an exciting and wonderful testimony. I could read about this family's adventures all night. Very good!
Great story with suspense and a wonderful ending.
Wow K it seems like only yesterday! God has really used you and your family to bless so many people. I really am proud of you.