The Official Writing Challenge
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A powerful piece. You successfully conveyed the devastation of a hopeless life in forsaken prison. The mood, though dark and morose, never failed to elicit the hope of our unwavering faith in Him. This was wonderfully written.
Well done. The conclusion was particularly powerful. Congratulations!
Whew! This brought the pain of forced labor and imprisonment to life. Such a feeling of release and fulfillment springs forth at the end. Great job on the win!
God is faithful. "Though he slay me, yet will I trust in him," (Job 13:15 KJV). A gripping portrayal giving witness to God's truth. Congratulations on your win with this wonderful submission! You waited a long time to jump onboard -- I hope you'll stay on now for a long ride on FW's Challenge!

Sandra, congratulations on your 8th place win in the Editors' Choice and 2nd place in the Level 2 Challenge. Well done. If you haven't already realized, then it's time to move up to Level 3 now. You're definitely ready for it. With love, Deb (Challenge Coordinator)
Bittersweet! A very good account of--possibly the confinement of Jews during WWII? Good writing. I could feel her discouragment and pain.
WOW! This is an awesome story. It could be part of an audiobook...or a movie!