The Official Writing Challenge
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A powerful piece. You successfully conveyed the devastation of a hopeless life in forsaken prison. The mood, though dark and morose, never failed to elicit the hope of our unwavering faith in Him. This was wonderfully written.
05/30/05
Wow!
Well done. The conclusion was particularly powerful. Congratulations!
Whew! This brought the pain of forced labor and imprisonment to life. Such a feeling of release and fulfillment springs forth at the end. Great job on the win!
God is faithful. "Though he slay me, yet will I trust in him," (Job 13:15 KJV). A gripping portrayal giving witness to God's truth. Congratulations on your win with this wonderful submission! You waited a long time to jump onboard -- I hope you'll stay on now for a long ride on FW's Challenge!

05/31/05
Sandra, congratulations on your 8th place win in the Editors' Choice and 2nd place in the Level 2 Challenge. Well done. If you haven't already realized, then it's time to move up to Level 3 now. You're definitely ready for it. With love, Deb (Challenge Coordinator)
Bittersweet! A very good account of--possibly the confinement of Jews during WWII? Good writing. I could feel her discouragment and pain.
02/22/08
WOW! This is an awesome story. It could be part of an audiobook...or a movie!