The Official Writing Challenge
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You kept me reading from beginning to end. The emotions of the parents were wonderfully expressed. Beautifully written.
I read with interest from beginning to end, with a knot in the pit of my stomach. I shared in the turmoil of the situation and also in the hope. Nicely done.
I'm easily distracted from a piece if the pace is off even a little and you held my attention firmly. Good writing and good mechanics. Your entry deserves to be considered among the winners this week.
Well paced entry, enjoyable reading. Good job.