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11/09/07
Good analogy using football. Being a football fan myself I can appreciate the comparison. Needed a little more meat to draw in the evangelism concept to me though. Yes, we all are suppose to be a walking testimony but with the millions watching football on the weekend I'm not sure how many see a play without a tantrum as a ministry tool. Overall a good piece.
11/10/07
Good illustration!

I fumbled a bit over some of the long sentences, but this is nothing that a second pair of eyes couldn't help you correct.

I will remember this tangible concept when I'm watching the Cowboys win.
Ew, don't "boo"!!!!
11/15/07
Very good analogy. Not familiar with American football, I was still able to understand what you were conveying and I anticipated you were going to tie in the football game to your walk with the Lord.