The Official Writing Challenge
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11/13/07
This is such a wonderful poem with a lovely lilting rhythm that I'm sorry more persons didn't read it. Many persons don't feel equipped to comment on poetry and so avoid doing so. However, I'm glad when the poets there are feel moved by God to put their inspiration and message in verse as you have done in your poem and give pleasure to those who love reading poetry even though they may not review it.
11/15/07
This is a very creative angle, and it gave me much to think upon....the differences truly can be a stumbling block not just to believers, but to the lost as well. Great job!