The Official Writing Challenge
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11/01/07
You make some powerful points. Don't forget to capitalize the Word of God and the Bible and such. Persuasive article in many ways.
11/02/07
Yes, Sunday School is very important. Thank you for sharing.
Laury
11/06/07
Needs a little work but good points made through out, polish it up a bit and it will work.
The message is important and you make strong points. The example is a good way to emphasize an idea and you did a great job of that at the end when you showed the value to the community.