The Official Writing Challenge
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11/01/07
"Lord, if you will, please show me how to live right So I can truly follow you both in daytime and in night"

This is the very reason we go to Sunday school....
11/04/07
Your poem although it rhymed had no meter to it. What makes poetry is the flow not necessarily the rhyme. I am not sure either what the poem had to do with Sunday School. On a positive note please the content of your poem was good. Please continue writing and learning.