The Official Writing Challenge
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Very convicting!

I would have loved for you to have told a bit more of this story - did this experience change the MC? How? Looks like you had some words to spare.

A lesson we all need to learn. Well written.
I love the conviction Anna felt.
Oooh, a zinger indeed!

I wonder if you could have Anna's thoughts in italics rather than in quotation marks. I thought for a while that she was speaking them aloud, and I wondered who she was talking to.

The message here is important and presented in a great way.
Interesting at the beginning and powerful at the end. GREAT message for all of us as Christians.
A lesson we ALL need to be reminded of from time to time :) Thanks!
Congratulations, Theresa. Your entry placed 14th in Level 2. The Top 15 in each Level and the Top 40 Overall Lists are posted each week in the Weekly Results and Highest Rankings Forum of the Faithwriters Message Boards.

(Oh, and by the way, when I said "it looked like you had words to spare" in my previous comment, all I meant was that it appeared you had not used all 750 words - so you could add to the story if you wanted to)