The Official Writing Challenge
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I'm glad this ended well. I would have predicted escalation. It was pretty much believeable for me. Good job.
09/08/07
A bold attack on a difficult subject! Sensitive treatment. Well done.
09/11/07
The confrontation of the generations. It will probably continue until the Lord comes! The pride of the elder, and the passion of the younger. You wrote a great story exemplifying this clash between father and son.
09/14/07
I like the happy ending! Congrats on your placing.
09/14/07
Congratulations, Mark. In addition to your first place in Level 2, your entry placed 24th overall. The Lists for the Top 15 in each Level and the Top 40 overall is available in the Weekly Results and Highest Rankings forum of our Faithwriters Message Boards