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I really enjoyed this story! Jamie comes alive in it--I can see him and feel as though I know him. Beautiful, vivid descriptions.

The title also drew me in--titles with personal names in them always spark my curiosity about the owners of those names.

Great job!
It's amazing what God puts into our children and brings out as they develop. This fabulous story will encourage many parents of beautiful, very sensitive children.
I loved the way that Jamie changed from the fearful boy, to fearless man. A great story and well done. chris x
How beautifully you told this story. There was just a bit of humour, a little anxiety as to what would happen to Jamie and then the unfolding of his character and personality which blossomed into strength of character and a spiritual need to serve others. How wonderful is our God who does all things well and thanks to you for sharing.
This loving tribute and character sketch was a blessing to read.
What a beautiful story! I really was encouraged as I read the ending of your story, for my son is very cautious about everything, too. That sensitive heart is a treasure to the Lord. It's so easy for the sensitive soul to hear the loving call of God on his life.
Congratulations, Deborah. Your entry has placed 8th in Level 2. The Lists for the Top 15 in each Level and the Top 40 overall is available in the Weekly Results and Highest Rankings forum of our Faithwriters Message Boards
We know this young man personally and just recently had him and his wife in our home. God has truly blessed you as his mother. May God use his quiet, determined ways to accomplish great things for His Kingdom.