The Official Writing Challenge
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i can imagine, that lots of students going through their finals would experience this kind of torment. The ending may need a little more work, but overall a good testimony. chris x
08/31/07
This is a nice piece filled with hope.

I like how you show prayer makes such a difference.

Good work.
Helen, this is such a touching story. It feels very real to me ...so precious. I do believe you have 'the poet's heart'! No doubt about it. Thank you.
09/13/07
I love the title - it is especially catchy to one who has been afraid of failure myself in the past. (I like to think I've grown up a little since ;-) ). And the content was well told. It also served as an educational piece about theophostic prayer - I've heard about it, but not known a lot about it. All up, an excellent piece of writing, Helen! Thanks for sharing it.