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An unusual thought on the theme, and a challenging one. Some good descriptive parts, too. Well done.
Such a sad truth described in this story. You did a great job of telling it.
Great description of the countryside on your walk - almost felt like I was there. Good job.
I really enjoyed reading this, and I like the descriptions that you used. Great job, keep writing!
Ooooh, good one! Needs to be read before many a church board meeting...
Such a creative take on the subject. Your descriptions were very rich, and this was quite moving. Great read!
I too loved the descriptions in the story--I could feel the coolness of that autumn morning! Such a powerful message as well. ^_^
Some very interesting imagery here. Well done!
This is a keeper. I enjoyed the message in your piece. Everybody needs to read this before going to church this weekend.
It's unfortuante that this really happens in churches. What a great way to illustrate it. You gave me something to think about. Well done.
Short but dead on, I'd say sweet but you hit the topic so well, this was definitely sad. What a sober reminder. Very well written!
What a great message. This is very convicting. Good job.