The Official Writing Challenge
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08/02/07
An unusual thought on the theme, and a challenging one. Some good descriptive parts, too. Well done.
Such a sad truth described in this story. You did a great job of telling it.
Great description of the countryside on your walk - almost felt like I was there. Good job.
08/05/07
I really enjoyed reading this, and I like the descriptions that you used. Great job, keep writing!
08/06/07
Ooooh, good one! Needs to be read before many a church board meeting...
08/07/07
Such a creative take on the subject. Your descriptions were very rich, and this was quite moving. Great read!
08/08/07
I too loved the descriptions in the story--I could feel the coolness of that autumn morning! Such a powerful message as well. ^_^
08/08/07
Some very interesting imagery here. Well done!
08/08/07
This is a keeper. I enjoyed the message in your piece. Everybody needs to read this before going to church this weekend.
It's unfortuante that this really happens in churches. What a great way to illustrate it. You gave me something to think about. Well done.
08/09/07
Short but dead on, I'd say sweet but you hit the topic so well, this was definitely sad. What a sober reminder. Very well written!
What a great message. This is very convicting. Good job.