The Official Writing Challenge
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This is a gem of a story. I love how you told it! It was so interesting and tightly constructed with just enough details to give the reader the picture you wanted to paint. Well done!
I definitely enjoyed this "new perspective" on the shipwreck. The voice seemed just right.
I like the way you walked through the story with daily entries. An enjoyable read from a very interesting perspective. Great Job!!
Oh this is so good. I knew it was Luke by day 10. Very good descriptions of life on a boat during stormy weather. I enjoyed this.
I loved the simplicity of your entry, yet the profound truth that shined through it! The line, "His happiness, joy, and contentment are found someplace other than in the things hes going through," was one of my favorites and the conclusion was the perfect capstone to the entry.
God Bless,
I enjoyed your style of writing here. This is very good! Though I've not read many entries this week, this is one of my favorities thus far! Great job!
Very well done. You kept Luke in character both a doctor, writer and companion to Paul.
This is an excellent retelling of the story. I like the way you presented it in diary form.
This was an interesting look at an old bible story. Made it more real in a sense and I liked the format like a journal. Very good. ^_^