The Official Writing Challenge
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Your descriptions of Yeller's happiness are vivid and appealing! Nothing can equal the glad tidings of the family pet! I enjoyed reading this.
I really liked this. It sounds a lot like the way my wife interacts with our dog 'Cliffard' - yeah I know, Cliffard? 4 yr old named it! Anyway...this was a very entertaining story, good job!
I think I know Yeller! Loved your descriptions and the humor woven in-between. I definitely got a sense of "happpiness" as I read this!
Delightful! We should be as happy with such little encouragement.
You certainly brought Yeller to life on this page. The description was graphic. You conveyed the happiness you experience with him in watching his happiness. Well done.
Wow! You caught the excitement I see in my dogs and put into word pictures so clearly. I often wonder if God didn't give us animals to remind us of Him and His love and excitement for His children. No, I don't see Him running laps around heaven and jumping up on angels when we approach Him. But I do feel His joy when we serve and glorify Him.

Thank you for the wonderful piece. Well written, excellant.

God bless and keep writing.
Delightful! I especially liked the "Dog Whisperer" threat. You have such an obvious gift for animal/people observation. :0) Well done.