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This is a unique take on the topic. I like the analogy of the "stick." Very good advice.
07/20/07
I really enjoyed this story. Sometimes God does ask us to give up the things we 'THINK' we need, just so He can have a clean slate to work with, to give us what He 'KNOWS' we need. This was great, good job!
I liked this story. Very creative - my stick. So many people carry their stick to their disadvantage. A very good message in your work.
07/21/07
I bet I've used that word stick a few times too many, too. A great analogy and very descriptive!
07/21/07
Very good and a good message also.
How creative! I am still pondering your analogy. Such a wonderful lesson!
07/24/07
A very innovative way of dealing with the subject. The message is loud and clear. We can only find true happiness if we give up those negative props we hold on to and let God be our stronghold. Thanks for sharing.
07/24/07
What a neat approach! Not only creative, but with a powerful message. Well done.
It might prove interesting for people to name their sticks, Manipulation, Power, Malinger, Clown, etc. Very creative and well-crafted article.