The Official Writing Challenge
This article has been read 747 times
Member Comments
Member
Date
Wow! This was beautifully written. I loved the analogy of the rain that falls outside and the storms that can rage in our daily lives. I loved the imagery of the white lace umbrella, soft and feminine, yet powerful enough to keep a protectful covering on our fragile hearts. It was interesting from beginning to end. Very nicely done.
The imagery is very vivid and can feel the girl's sadness and disbelief as she sits after the compeition. A strong analogy, well written.
05/09/05
I enjoyed the two fold meaning of the umbrella. clever symbolism. chris miller
05/10/05
A most excellent entry! A tender weave of analogy and truth, which will have great impact on all who will listen to its raindrops of wisdom!
05/13/05
Very clever and gentle at the same time.