The Official Writing Challenge
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Very cute. Maybe I should listen more when my dog is barking!
What a great little story about life from a dogs point of view. I love the comment about being smart because he's part Aussie.
06/11/07
Cute and clever - fun voice!
06/11/07
Good job! Worth expanding! And while you're expanding it, consider making your long paragraphs just a tad shorter, so the younguns can read it easier. Very nice story.
06/11/07
I loved the way you told this one from the dog's pov... Great Job!!!
The Whodeanee part was cute, and the story itself was interesting told from a dog's point of view.

Be careful about using words like 'though' too much (five times in the story). After a couple of times I was watching for it.

Any child who has had a dog go missing for a period of time and then turn up again would be amused by this story. They might even imagine their dog had some real escapades.
I loved your escape artist dog's escapades--made for a nice adventure!
06/14/07
I'm a dog lover - and this is a wonderful story!
Children love dog stories. This being in the first person (doggie?) should be a hit.