The Official Writing Challenge
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06/02/07
How interesting! Good job with the dialog.
Some of us will never know the stress of the lives mentioned here. I can't imagine any such life, although I know it existed. You painted a good picture here for those of us who are ignorant of such pain.
06/03/07
Like quick scene changes, this was very cinematic. Well done.
06/03/07
Excellent description - I was engrossed from beginning to end.
Excellent writing. I, too, liked the switch in scenes. Also liked the German words in the dialogue, it added to the emotional content. Great job of writing.
06/04/07
Great story! I plan to visit the link provided to read more.
Excellent writing. I really liked the authenicity of this piece and the unusual presentation. It hits us where we live, doesn't it, when we witness what it costs to truly serve a Lord Who knows what suffering is all about.