The Official Writing Challenge
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Good work. You make a very good point.
Oh, my... this is DEEP. Lots of stimulating thoughts presented in tight poetic style. Very nicely done.
Without ideals, where would we be.
So much of this work hit home with me, especially about being honest with yourself. This is really thought-provoking. Great work!
A nice poem with a good message. It is always to keep one's ideals.
We all need ideals to hold on to. Well done, though I think in the third verse you meant soar, not sour.