The Official Writing Challenge
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05/25/07
Good work. You make a very good point.
05/27/07
Oh, my... this is DEEP. Lots of stimulating thoughts presented in tight poetic style. Very nicely done.
Without ideals, where would we be.
05/27/07
So much of this work hit home with me, especially about being honest with yourself. This is really thought-provoking. Great work!
A nice poem with a good message. It is always to keep one's ideals.
We all need ideals to hold on to. Well done, though I think in the third verse you meant soar, not sour.