The Official Writing Challenge
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Thanks for sharing these inner feelings.
A really and truly beautiful poem - but I suggest you set it in verses in the usual, typical poetic form.

Really enjoyed this one! Thanks for sharing.
A nice testimony to God's saving power.

Separating this into lines and perhaps stanzas would definitely make this look more like a poem.

I liked these lines: "I am never alone, yet lonely I live;" and "keeping my faith, for I will soon be 'there.'"
Thanks for sharing.
Another interesting format - taking rhyming lines "out of the stanza box" and letting them flow with the freedom of prayer. Nicely done.
Very nice. You may want to rethink your format, but overall, it's great. Wonderful thoughts.
A very nice testimony which could easily be set into poetic form. Keep writing!
Very beautifully written.