The Official Writing Challenge
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A beautiful story and told very well.
Great use of flashback to make this a very touching story
This was so well written. So many memories as we grow older and you made us care for this person and see life for a moment through her eyes.
Thank you for the glimpse into this story of a time long ago. I read it with interest.
Very beautiful!
Chris, Congratulations on your 6th place win in the Editors' Choice. Our Level 2 entrants did so well this week and the ratings were so close! The majority of winners and semi-finalists were within a breath of one another. So well done. If you feel ready, I'd encourage you to move up to Level 3. I think you're ready for it. With love, Deb (Challenge Coordinator)
Congratulations on your placement with this charming story. You did a great job introducing Dora and integrating the flashback -- I enjoyed reading!