The Official Writing Challenge
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Good memory story. Well written.
05/12/07
Lovely story. I enjoyed how you captured the feel of the city.
05/14/07
Good descriptions of the pier and all the happenings.

There are some tense issues in the first few paragraphs, but easy enough to fix.

This is a great recording of family history.
05/16/07
Wiping the tears...thank you for sharing this story. Well written.
05/16/07
Yes, I recognize the name of the ship, and the added poignance to this piece because of knowing its history. Very good!
05/16/07
Wonderful sense of place in this piece - and I also recognize the boat. Great writing, Angela!
05/17/07
Really nice story here. I loved the part about the "delivery room" it added just the right touch. Nice writing here and blessed by God.