The Official Writing Challenge
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05/02/05
Wonderful! I love the way you told this story.

Kathy
05/02/05
Loved this !!! Sadly, it is too true. D. James Kennedy has a sermon called "Merry Tifton Day" which also points this out. Our schools get 2 weeks out for . . .well, I can't say the name of the season. Apparently it's unconstitutional now. You did a great job!
05/03/05
Great analogy. I like your storytelling style
05/03/05
I know what you were trying to say, but I got a little lost in the story. The writing seemed more on the beginner level. Please don't be discouraged. This is only one woman's opinion. I do look forward to reading your next work.
Your style was very interesting. I wasn't sure where you were going in the beginning but by the end I was saying, "Oh, I see". Nicely done.
05/07/05
Nicely done. When writing you don't give away the punch line before its time, because it motivates the reader to read. This was gracefully done. What the reader was waiting for was at the end of the story where it belonged. Good Job!
05/09/05
Hi Randy. I just wanted to take a moment to encourage you by letting you know that your entry made it into the semi-finals for the Christmas Challenge and I can honestly say that all the semi-finalist ratings were very, very close. Although you didn't actually receive an award, you still did very well. With love, Deb (Challenge Coordinator)