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05/10/07
I really enjoyed this narrative--creative and original, as well as thought-provoking. Never thought before about so many animals and other aspects of God's creation serving as models for human "inventions"--but it's remarkably true! Great perspective and vividly written in the form of the grandfather's narrative. Good job!
Excellent! Very creative, and I love how you give all glory to the Creator!
05/10/07
Cute...and true. :) I enjoyed reading your article.
05/15/07
What a fun read! I've never thought about it like that before and it's pretty cool. I liked how you portrayed the grandfather--I could hear him quite easily. good job.
Cute article on the true identity of the inventor of flight and other truths. Good job.
06/30/07
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