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It seems that you read the article and wrote your own dialoge for the story, veryyyyyy innnnnteresting. Forgive me if I misunderstood that. However, I got caught up in the drama of the sinking ship and the sacrifice almost as if I felt I was there. It is a moving piece, destined to impact others as they ponder it. Thanks for writing.
05/07/07
I really appreciated the way you brought this moving historical event to life with dialogue and action. I'd never heard of these men before; thanks for this very inspiring account!
05/08/07
Wow, great story of true heroes. This is written very well. Easy to read, flows smoothly, kept me interested. Very nice inspirational story.
Bittersweet story. Wonderful brave men, and I like the way you tied in the scripture.
Great story - and you did a wonderful job of bringing it to life!
05/09/07
Wow - I also had never heard of these men, and am SO glad that I have now. You have told their story absolutely rivetingly. Definitely an inspiration to all!