The Official Writing Challenge
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05/03/07
Good illustration for perfectionism. I love the line about the chicken pox scar giving her character.

I saw one missed question mark, and one missed word -- but other than that, I really enjoyed the dialogue.
Moves smooth, good realistic dialogue. A very well done piece that teaches a very good lesson. Thanks for sharing.
05/07/07
Very nice--realistic dialog, an unforced lesson, likeable characters.
Good life's lesson in scrapbooking. Good pov.
05/09/07
Great dialogue here - and a good lesson. A delightful read!
I felt like I was right in the room where this conversation was taking place. Great job of drawing the reader in.
05/10/07
Great lesson on perfection, one I will tuck away and pull out again and again!