The Official Writing Challenge
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04/19/07
Funny, funny. Love it.
Title grabbed my attention and the story kept me reading. I loved how the character's imagination got away from her. Nice job.
Funny story. Complete surprise. I expected some other solution. Good job.
04/23/07
Creative and fun! I almost felt like you didn't need the last paragraph - just repeated what had been said before. I loved your MC's imagination for sure - we've all gotten like that, haven't we? Keep writing!
04/24/07
What a situation your character finds herself in! Neatly told story and characterisation. yeggy
04/24/07
Well constructed entry. Good dialogue. Nicely done.
Great job. The characters are very believable, and you kept my attention all the way through.
04/25/07
What an amazing coincidence! This was fun to read.
04/26/07
Love your description and the surprise ending. A good "prescription" for the blues... a happy read. Thanks, Cheri