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We take for granted the freedom to worship God and read His word. Nice job.
Interesting take on the future of a Christian's life. You kept me in suspense.
This was amazing! You captured the whole feel of a "mystery"-set town, and the descriptions were excellent. I'll admit, I kind of rushed to the end to see just what was going on--can't believe you made us wait till the very last line! :-)

The only thing I wasn't sure of was what kind of accent the people had. Italian? Irish? Texan?

The twist at the end is awesome. I'm not sure why this didn't get more comments, but perhaps now, after your win, you will. Congratulations!
What an amazing story, and in so few words! The suspense was awesome, and the end well worth the build up. Congratulations.