The Official Writing Challenge
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Kleenex...someone pass the kleenex. This is so full of tenderness. Even though we know God only has to speak it, I loved your imagination in this piece. Beautiful! The closing left me breathless.
Cool! I really enjoyed this. You kept me guessing right until the end. This was well written and a very good read. Nice work!
Lovely picture. I enjoyed this very much.
Tender story. Shows God's love for Adam. Loved the part where you brought in the fact that he loved Adam so much that he would die for him.
Fun idea. You had me to the end. Well done!
Great description. I cringed when I read,
"At first the needle met a soft resistance, but then the skin gave way allowing the needle to pass through."

I liked the twist at the end. I didn't know you were talking about God. Nice job.
An awesome piece of work! So glad the "other" Judges agreed.
Congratulations. I am not surprised!

This is a masterpiece. I love surprises, and this was the best.

In Jesus' Name,

Wow, what a thriller -- you had me guessing until the end.

I had a feeling it might be about God when you mentioned the incisdion in His side.
Keep writing, and God Bless,