The Official Writing Challenge
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Very good! You used some great imagery here - I think you have a shot at winning the challenge this week!
03/03/07
This is an interesting take on the topic and you stated your views clearly. Keep writing!
03/04/07
Intense emotion in your writing, your heart, and your tears. Thanks God we can help sew the wounds in those around us and share his cup.
I liked your title and enjoyed the poem. The last stanza is my favorite....drink from his cup.
Very Moving. Not much for prose but this was a good read from first line to the last.