The Official Writing Challenge
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Oh, I liked this! Great POV here and many original ideas from an oft-told tale. I enjoyed this and look forward to reading more of your work in the future.
I'm not much on prose. But this has a good message, and I enjoyed it.
I really enjoyed this approach to the topic. Very well written. I esp. liked the first and the last stanzas. Well done!
Wonderful imagery and caught the message we can feel from Adam. Thank you. God bless and keep writing and showing the way to others.
great POV on this account of man's fall. i too truly enjoy using my imagination to get "into the heads" of many bible figures. your expression of events through adams' perspective gives the story a freshness. good rhythm too.
I don't know you from Adam, bud... but I think I like you already! (boisterous laughter)