The Official Writing Challenge
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Unique approach. Good story. Would like to hear more of it.
Great story! I loved the hidden messages. (or core messages) The dialogue between the two kept me interested all the way through. A winner in my book.
Wonderful title and charming story! I did notice a couple small mechanical errors, but the piece held my interest very well.
Good work! I liked the almost parable flavour of this story and the deeper meaning in it. Also enjoyed the dialogue and interaction between your characters.