The Official Writing Challenge
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Good story. I really liked the preacher's comment about knowing the original. Your punctuation does need work. Good pov here.
03/08/07
A fantastic read, my friend! Great talent here; however, no need to repeat the quotation marks when the same person is speaking. Also, separate the dialogue a bit so the reader will know who is talking - but otherwise...Terrific story! Loved it! And keep on writing...great potential!