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This article had quite an exciting beginning. I was "hooked". (Forgive the pun.) I enjoyed hearing about the big one that got away and the subsequent connection to witnessing. The second half - as you shifted to the devotional aspect - would have been even better if developed a bit more. All in all a really nice job.
Vivid picture. This was written well - good job!
Absolutely delightful and exceptional! Loved the experience, loved the message, and the writing was superior. You made everything sound so real, as if we were there, and then entwined it in a wonderful devotional. A+ FW!
Short, sweet and to the point! Loved this piece of work - and the brevity. Says alot in a short space and written very well. Keep up the good work!