The Official Writing Challenge
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A very sad story. It seemed to me that the character needed support and the one place she should be given it...was a disappointment.
This is a hard one but you told it well. Good job.
Their hands were loose – almost lifeless. This is a perfect description. A person's heart is conveyed through their hand shake. This story is even sadder because parts of the church are guilty of this kind of behaviour.

Sad story. Couldn't really understand what the reason for the coolness, but this conduct also tells a sad story. Written well, and has a believable title. God Bless.