The Official Writing Challenge
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02/01/07
This had a great beginning - it drew me in right away. nicely written.

Karen
02/02/07
I know what you mean about being "there" when you read a good book. The words have the power to transport us and I appreciate the way your story brought this out. Nice work
02/02/07
Awesome opening line and the rest delivers just as nicely. Loved it!
02/03/07
Great title!

A few sentence fragments make for a slightly choppy read, but this is a good piece, meaningful and true.
03/08/07
Loved it! Beautiful setting, beautiful thoughts, and a sermon without being a sermon...if you know what I mean? Touches the soul! I know you hated that last "h" left out of "where"....but things happen. Great job! Kudos!
03/16/07
After reading your article "Daddy's Home" and now this one, we are obviously dogs lovers (my favorite dog of all time is named "Sam").

Well written, flows well with easy transitions.

God bless and keep writing.